Feedback

The class had a screening of music videos which gave everyone a chance to say what was good and what didn't work. Our feedback sheets were positive, everyone circled "It definitely has potential".

The other groups said the elements that work are:

• Paint fight
• The paint fight was really effective
• The powder fight
• Reversing the shot of blowing powder paint
• Powder fight worked very well
• Love the slow motion shots and reverse shot of the powder
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• Powder paint fight
• The reverse shot
• Beginning and ending with Arron.

The other groups said the things that need developing are:

• Lip syncing
• Some shots are too long - especially performance
• Tie it together with more consistency
• Lip syncing at the start
• Lip syncing
• Lips out of sync
• Gap needs to be filled
• Beginning needs to be tighter.

From this feedback we now have to improve on the lead singer performance, we could either get Jake to do it again or someone completely different who would be more interested in performing for us because Jake didn't exactly put a lot of effort in to it.

Also we have been told to cut the song down a bit because it is too long.